Cop Story

A story with cops in it. Secretly a disability bingo.

1-10 - Door and Key

Average Rating: 5.00

March 29th, 2018, 6:04 pm

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Oly-RRR, March 29th, 2018, 6:18 pm

This is roughly where the old version of the chapter got to by page 3. NO REGRETS! Well, lots of regrets but at least not about this.

The comic also got a bunch of new readers since the last update! Hello, new readers! Old readers who remember the old chapter, please don't spoil the story for them if possible (or put a spoiler warning in the comment)? :) Either way, be nice to each other, this March sucks.

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mitchellbravo, March 29th, 2018, 6:30 pm

:D :D :D :D :D :D

I LOVE THE DYNAMICS OF THE CHARACTERS INTERACTING WITH EACH OTHER/WITH THE ENVIRONMENT

& this page also features another of my favorite parts of the art which is THE POSTERS (though these seem pretty tactful and sincere [i have to tell you about my new class because i keep wanting to make a version of "HELP US HELP YOU HELP YOURSELVES TO PROTECT YOURSELF FROM ______" to address some of their myriad issues])

Kane's perfetly weaselly and sneaky looking here as well, especially in the third panel

UGHHHHHH OLY I'VE HAD SUCH A DAY TODAY I WAS CLOSE TO BREAKING LENT EARLY BUT YOU'VE GIVEN ME PUSH TO KEEP GOING

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Oly-RRR, April 16th, 2018, 4:40 pm

@mitchellbravo: THAAANKS 8)

I was kinda worried funny posters would distract from the action or affect the whole mood on the page... You can tell I've been questioning my old comic decisions a lot lol. I guess I'll have to work in the "classics" on some other pages then!

And gosh, I'm glad this comic gives you something positive - for me it's both the thing that keeps me going and the thing that brings me down, depending on the day. COMICS, MANNNNN

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Lutztoons, March 29th, 2018, 9:08 pm

First of all, this Kane guy seems like a joy. And he's leaving a nice message for the police force! How thoughtful of him! I like how he gets caught scraping FUCK COPS on the door and nobody is saying anything about it. Nutter is more angry at him for not staying put by the vending machines.

I'm loving how you drew his hand in the first panel. The red spotting and small scars are great details. Also I just noticed that Nutter is jabbing him in the butt with his foot.

There's something that feels really menacing about that bottom panel. The low angle, and the harsh fluorescent lighting all make it feel really foreboding and disorienting. And I just realized that the dark maroon light in that STORAG room is really creepy. What delightful things will happen in there???

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Oly-RRR, April 16th, 2018, 4:46 pm

@Lutztoons: Nutter is very understanding about the underclasses being romantically interested in the police, which is clearly what the message on the door humbly tries to communicate- well, no, not remotely... but Nutter has his priorities.

And any dark room a large guy pushes you into is generally not a good sign. D:

New pages. Totally in progress!

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Squirreltastic-Blue, March 30th, 2018, 2:14 pm

Now you've got him all upset!

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Lutztoons, April 17th, 2018, 3:51 pm

Kane loves the police force so much that he can't keep it to himself. He was about to carve a big heart on the door that said KANE ♡ LIECESTER before Nutter wandered by and caught him.
And YAAAAAAY new pages! Now we'll get to see what delightful things will happen in that closet. They're pfffffrobablyyyy not going to play Seven Minutes in Heaven.

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Oly-RRR, April 21st, 2018, 9:43 am

@Lutztoons: Coming out of the closet is generally a good thing, but going in is almost never fun. :P

SO MANY INNUENDOS

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Lutztoons, April 21st, 2018, 2:39 pm

@Oly-RRR: I have a feeling that only one of them is going to be coming out of this particular closet. Behave yourself, Nutter! We wouldn't want Cop Story to turn into a skeezy BL crackfic all of a sudden. :P

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Oly-RRR, May 3rd, 2018, 3:16 pm

@Lutztoons: I keep threatening to do exactly that for April Fools but I've been too sad and tired each March so far. Someday, someday... >:D

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Lutztoons, May 3rd, 2018, 3:45 pm

@Oly-RRR: Or optionally, you could just do it whenever and just tell everyone it's Opposite Day. >:3